This is a story idea for a movie in which a South Asian person has contact with Native Americans. The point of the story is to set up a theoreticaly possible, if fictional, framework in which two different kinds of "Indians" could meet. To my knowledge, no suich meeting of historic import has ever occurred.
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This story begins in India in the late 1850's, shortly after the Indian Mutiny of 1857. The British army in India is in the process of being restructured. Our main character is a loyal Sikh, under the command of a young British officer.
We need a reason for this officer to leave India in 1862, and for this Sikh to go with him, but once they depart, the head to North America to observe the Civil War, much in the style of Colonel Freemantle, who obnserved the Battle of Gettysburg, esentially as a "war tourist."
Our british officer and Sikh soldier land in Texas and work their way north to find the front lines. In the course of their adventures, they become separated, and our Sikh winds up wandering through Indian country.
He is found in the desert by a native tribe, who nurses him back to health. He proves his valor in a skirmish with another native tribe. In time, he goes through a vision quest and becomes a valued member of the tribe, much in the style of "A Man Called Horse" or "Little Big Man." His bond with the tribe even goes as far as getting a wife and becoming blood-brother with her brother.
Meanwhile, our British officer had fallen in with some Missouri bushwackers, much like Quantrill's Raiders. At the end of the war, the raiders head west to escape the pursuing US cavalry. In their flight, their leader is wounded. As he lays dying, he passes leadership on to the Britisher, for he has shown his battle skill and leadership qualities, and the men support him.
The raiders head into Indian territory with a notion to go to Mexico. Starvation and thirst dog them until they wind up getting ambushed by the tribe of which the Sikh is now a member. In the course of the ambush, the two men reunite. The Sikh convinces the cheif to let the raiders live and reover with them until they are ready to go on their way. One of the raiders tries to steal from the tribe, but the Britisher kills him, proving his sense of courtesy to the tribe to which his old friend now belongs.
Meanwhile the US cavalry is till on the trail of the raiders. They are better equipped for the desert than the raiders were, so they are hearty when they find the tribe. The ensuing massacre kills the Sikh's wife and child, and reminds both the Sikh and the Britisher of incidents in the Indian Mutiny that they committed, and are repulsed.
The cavalry manages to capture the Britisher and the Sikh alive. The go to the Britisher and inform him tha the is a sort of hero in England, where they have been reading reports of his gallant adventures in fighting for such a lost cause. Personally, the cavallry officer would be happy to execute him along with the rest of the readers for treason and insurrection, but Queen Victoria has sent a direct messsage to the president to bring him back alive. The Sikh, however, is "just another Indian."
The Sikh's blood brother/brother in law had been out hunting when the massacre/attack occurs, so he is able to help him escae. The Sikh won't go without the Britisher, but there is a moment of hesitation as the Britisher considers his loyalty to the queen. That hesitation proves fatal, however. The escape attempt is discovered. The Britisher decides to sacrifice himself so the two "Indians" can escape.
The blood brothers get away and locate the rest of the tribe's warriors, who had all been out hunting and missed the massacre. The blood brothers form a war party of these braves, and forge a legend of indomitable fighting spirit against the US cavalry.
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I need to research which Native American tribe would fit best into this story. I also need to do a little more research into the life of a mid-19th century British officer to get him out of India and to america with a Sikh soldier in 1862.
My main question is, however, is this an appropriate use of NAtive American and Sikh culture for the purpose of narrative entertainment, or and I selfishly appropriating the cultures at the roiskl of misrepresenting or offending them? The concept of "Indians" meeting Indians intrigues me. Folks have been confusing one for the other ever since Columbus' error centuries ago. Why not put them together and see what happens.
In my research so far, I found that a series of wars and rebellions in India in the mid 19th century had several parallels with the Indain Wars in th American West. These include massacres, the playing off of one group of natives agains the other, natives loyal to the colonial forces, a heavy dose of racism ans romanticism, etc. Perhaps by telling this fictional story I can bring up issues of colonailism, "white man's burden" issues, loyalty, honor, fairness, and justice.
What do you think?
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Friday, August 22, 2014
The Journal of Frankenstein's Brother, Part 2
EXCERPT FROM THE JOURNAL OF DR. NICHOLAS FRANKENSTEIN
as transcribed by Zorikh Lequidre
(part 2 of 2, continued from yesterday)
When I reached the creatures, I was
able to see them in greater detail, as if they now allowed themselves
to be revealed to me. I was now within their reach and had no
chance of getting away, even if I turned and ran with all my speed (a
course of action, that, upon reflection, a reasonable man should not
have considered unreasonable, but which, for reasons beyond my ken,
was completely outside my realm of consideration). I saw that they
were not quite human, but their eyes revealed an intelligence and
depth of feeling as deep as any man, perhaps even beyond.
My first thought was to introduce them
to my creature. I tried to speak, but found myself incapable of aught but the hoarsest of whispers. With only such a meager attempt at
verbal communication available to me, I decided to forgo words
altogether and gestured to them to follow me, and they did.
When we approached the creature's
cabin, I found him standing in the doorway, as if he was expecting
visitors. My mind now swims with the implications of this. Were my
creature and these beings of the North American woods communicating
on a level of which man was incapable? If so, how long had these
creatures been standing in the clearing, and what had they said to
each other? My mind boggles with the possibilities, but I must get on
with my report of what happened.
Unlike the human inhabitants of this
region, these beings met my creature with solemnity and restraint.
They touched each other on the shoulders. My creature hummed softly,
as if attempting to vocally reflect the sensation that had woken me
up. I started to feel small and insignificant beneath them, as if
this was a moment of great import and significance. To think that such a
small, frail, temporary creature as I, a member of a species only but
recently occupying this land, this planet, this universe could ever accomplish
anything as momentous as this would be an act of great hubris on
my part. I was merely an incidental part of the environment, no more
relevant than a small mammal in the trees, whose only concern for the
creatures now communing was whether they would interfere with his
gathering of nuts for the winter.
But still, beneath all this, I felt a
swelling of pride, for I had created this creature. With my own mind
I interpreted the work of my brother. With my own hands I constructed
the being that now stood before me. With my own initiative I had
brought him to this place. Without me none of this would have
happened, and we humans would have gone on living, concerning
ourselves with our petty squabbles, fighting over our metaphorical
nuts for the winter, never knowing that the secrets of life and
nature lie there before us for discovery, if only we could look past our
confounded prejudices and selfish desires to find them.
The next thing I knew I was back in my
own bed, the sun leaking through the trees, through the window, and into
our cabin. Had I dreamed it all? But the sensation was so real!
Sometimes dreams can be so real we accept them as fact until the
moment of awakening, and then try to deny their ephemerality in the
face of reality. But then they fade from memory like wisps of smoke
or ripples in the water with nothing, literally nothing, to prove
that they were ever there. In fear of this phenomena of
forgetfulness, I immediately sat to write down the experience, which
is the only way I can report it now, for it faded from my mind in
much the same way.
I chose not to share it with my
colleagues. They had come with me this far, had witnessed my success
in the laboratory and were accepting of the premise of the
experiment, but somehow I knew that to reveal this experience to them
would cause them to doubt my sincerity as a scientist. It had been an
experience that was unquantifiable, unverifiable, one that bordered
on the spiritual. I sought out footprints, or any other visible sign
of the incident I had experienced, and found nothing. Was I mad? Were
these creatures in such harmony with nature that they could move
among it without being detected or leaving a sign? Was there more to
the universe than the realm of human experience allows? Are there
truly more things in Heaven and Earth than is dreamt of in our
philosophy?
On the evening of that day the natives
came forth into the clearing by our cabins. It had been less than a
month since we had arrived, and it was the first full moon we would
experience there, and I supposed that this is what the natives were
celebrating. As the sun went down the natives lit a bonfire and
started dancing in a big circle. They played music with primitive
drums and pipes. As we stood and watched we were invited to join the
circle by the natives, and soon we were welcoming the full moon with
all our hearts. We were fed with the most delightful of foods and
drinks, presumably made from the local fruits and vegetables, nuts, roots, grains, and berries. I
thought it curious that there was no meat, particularly considering the animal skins the natives had worn in our previous encounter, but I assumed that these
innocent savages had found a way to live in harmony with the local
fauna, and resigned to pursue the question of the origins of the hides later. In any event, certainly from the taste and volume of the food at this
celebration, they had found epicurean satisfaction in a vegetarian diet.
The festival happened in such a
whirlwind of activity that I did not have the opportunity to invite
my creature to join, although I would have been concerned at
introducing him to so much excitement so soon. But before I was able
to collect my wits I had danced, dined, and drunk so much that I had
to retire to our cabin to recover.
I must have dozed off, for when I awoke
the full moon had risen and the sounds of celebration had died down. I
ventured out the door and saw the mysterious creatures from the
previous night sitting around the dying embers of the fire. The
natives were nowhere to be seen. I approached the creatures with
caution, wary lest any sudden movements or loud noises disturb them.
They now seemed real to me, almost common place, as if this was a
natural way for them to exist in a relaxed state.
I thought this would be a perfect
opportunity to bring forth my creature and see if he would commune
with them as he had the previous night. If that had been a dream, I
thought, what would happen now, in the light of reality? I tried to
whisper to the nearest one, but as in the previous night, my whisper
was so hoarse it could barely be said to be a sound at all.
Yet the nearest creature did hear me, and turned, slowly, to look at
me. I felt that the only other sound I could make than a whisper was
a full-throated shout, but my respect for the mood of the moment did
not allow it. These creatures seemed so large in my presence that the
only way they would be able to understand me was if I shouted, but
what business had I, a mere human, to do that in their presence? As a
scientist, dedicated to observing natural phenomena, how could I do
something so disruptive to the natural state of these strange beings?
But somehow the nearest creature, the
one who had turned to me, understood what I was trying to say. He did
not respond in any obvious, direct manner, but simply turned back to
the fire. Was I being ignored? Thought insignificant? Allowed to
leave? The meaning was inscrutable to me, but at least I was
obviously not a threat. I got up and ran to my creature's cabin. The
path seemed longer and more overgrown than I had thought it to be. I
found myself out of breath when I arrived. I opened the door to find
the plants that had been gathered to fill the cabin had nearly
overgrown it, forming a jungle of almost Amazonian dimensions. The
ceiling seemed higher than it had originally been built. His table
was in the middle of the room, and on it was a plate with a slice of
toasted bread with some form of sauce or preserve spread upon it. I
looked for my creature but saw no trace of him. Perhaps he was hiding
in the undergrowth, The idea that he could have left the cabin did
not occur to me. I picked up the toasted bread and examined it. I noticed
a smell on the spread. It was unfamiliar to me as being of any form
of spread or preserve of which I'd had experience. Then my eye
wandered past the bread, to the table, to the base of a large
plant-pot but a few feet away. I saw an...object. A thing, sticking
out from behind it. The thing was white and had the distinct shape of
a bone, a thighbone, perhaps. I was intrigued by the curiosity of
what sort of thing could have that shape and been brought into this
cabin.
I approached it cautiously, growing
more certain with each step that it was a thighbone, and more
trepidatious about what that might mean. I turned the corner around
the small tree inside the plant-pot and found a sight that will chill
me until the day that I die.
The thigh bone was connected to a hip
bone. The hip bone was connected to a back bone. The back bone was
connected to a skull, and the skull was resting under a pile of bones
higher than my own head.
What have I done?!? What have I
created!?! My blood froze. My body chilled. All the cliches of the
Penny Dreadfuls came alive in that moment of realization of the
abomination that had come forth from my laboratory, from my own
hands!
I retched. I collapsed. I crawled to
the door and ran back to my cabin. I searched for my colleagues to no
avail. I ran out of the cabin and saw the giant creatures of the
forest standing near the remains of the fire, facing me. Amongst
their number, central among them, was my creature. They started
moving towards me. I envisioned my bones on that pile in the cabin.
Grotesque images of my creature's mastication of my flesh flashed
before me. I turned and ran.
I ran through the woods, heedless of
the million bits and pieces, twigs and branches, rocks and stones,
leaves and insects in my path. As I ran I had a thought that was
terrifying in its comfort to me: That as his creator, my creature
wanted me to join them in their abominable, inhuman culture, to be
one of them, feasting of the flesh of lesser men! To imagine that I
would be comforted by being welcomed into such a fellowship! Was my
attachment to humanity, to human virtue so tenuous that I would join
a brotherhood that gained nourishment from consumption of my fellow
human beings, beings as capable of thought, of feeling, of creation
as I?
Sheer exhaustion and the denseness of
the undergrowth slowed my progress, but did not diminish my ardor for
exit from that nightmare, now too real to dismiss. Dawn came. As the sun climbed my flight continued. Fear and desperation overcame hunger and weariness and I continued to plunge forth through field and wood, across river and stream. Somehow I found my
way back to civilization in the form of a fort by a lake manned by soldiers of the
British Empire. I dared not tell them of my plight, my shame, my
horror, and allowed them to believe that I had been captured by
natives and struck dumb by being witness to some inhuman ritual that
I now would have thought tame by comparison to my true experience. I
write this journal in the desperate hope that it will somehow purge
me of these feeling I have, these visions of horror, this realization
of my folly.
My only endeavor now is to seek the undiscovered country from whose borders no man returns. My only hope is that I find a dreamless sleep, an eternal forgetfulness that will wipe clean all memory of what I have done. If however, I face some form of eternal damnation, I pray only that it will be my own to suffer, and that Humanity will not suffer from my hubris in thinking myself capable of achieving that which is only for nature or God to achieve. If would-be Prometheii continue to tamper with forces beyond their control they risk not only the ruination of their souls but the destruction of all we have achieved.
My only endeavor now is to seek the undiscovered country from whose borders no man returns. My only hope is that I find a dreamless sleep, an eternal forgetfulness that will wipe clean all memory of what I have done. If however, I face some form of eternal damnation, I pray only that it will be my own to suffer, and that Humanity will not suffer from my hubris in thinking myself capable of achieving that which is only for nature or God to achieve. If would-be Prometheii continue to tamper with forces beyond their control they risk not only the ruination of their souls but the destruction of all we have achieved.
These were the last words of the
journal of Dr. Nicholas Frankenstein. His body was never found.
On the grounds of a prestigious
university in the British Empire stands a monument to learning and
the pursuit of knowledge. The inscription is poetically worded,
describing how only through the tireless pursuit of knowledge can man
ever hope to improve himself.
Somewhere else is a small headstone on which reads the name DR. N. FRANKENSTEIN.
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Somewhere else is a small headstone on which reads the name DR. N. FRANKENSTEIN.
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Thursday, August 21, 2014
The Journal of Frankenstein's Brother Part 1
A couple of nights ago I had a dream. This dream affected me so much that not only did I feel inclined to write it down (as I have several other dreams in this blog), but to write a short story based on it. This story expands some of the experiences of the dream and builds upon it. I will be posting it in two parts. Here is part one:
EXCERPT FROM THE JOURNAL OF DR. NICHOLAS FRANKENSTEIN
as transcribed by Zorikh Lequidre
I was determined not to repeat the
mistakes of my brother.
I and my learned colleagues ventured
into the North American wilds to find a secluded spot where we could
educate my creature while gradually acclimating him to human
contact. I told him that we were going to investigate the local
flora, a project that seemed to interest him. With this in mind we
built two cabins in the woods a reasonable distance apart. I wanted
him to have his own space, to which he could retreat and have the
benefit of privacy and the dignity of possession. His cabin was
large, and he took to filling it with plant specimens, until it was
nearly as foliated on the inside as the outside. I took this as a
sign that he liked our choice of environment, and congratulated
myself on what I thought was my correct instincts.
After some days a local tribe paid us a
visit. They had a curious command of the language, which I
attributed to their isolation and limited contact with the civilized
world. They were bundled in unfamiliar skins with decorations of long
hair and fur, which I took to be of the local fauna. Being as this
region was so remote, I attributed my unfamiliarity with them to an assumption that the wildlife of these woods must be uniquely adapted to the environment and had not yet
been collected in sufficient quantities to fill the zoologial gardens
and natural history museums of my acquaintance.
I informed the natives that I had a friend who
wished to met them. Using the broadest of gestures and the simplest
of words, I brought forth my creature from his cabin and introduced
him to the natives. They smiled at each other, touched hands, and made
eye contact with genuine delight. They were quite welcoming to the
creature, a far cry from the ironically uncivilized treatment given
to my brother's tragic creature by civilized man. I felt this was a
very good sign, and again felt confirmed in my belief that I was
doing the right thing.
I kept the meeting brief, as I did not
want to push my luck, and escorted my creature back to his cabin. His
face revealed an amazement, as if he had not expected such an
encounter. He seemed almost a little confused as to what to make of
it all. I attributed this to the differences between the natives and
my colleagues and myself. I expected that he had not realized that
humans came in such varieties.
Again I congratulated myself. The
species of man comes in a wonderful variety of shapes, sizes and
colors, and we must learn to recognize and appreciate the unique
values of each of them, or we are doomed to destroy ourselves. The
xenophobia of the unenlightened masses comes from lack of contact
with the varieties of the world, and plays to the fear of what is
different. This is a logical fear, as our simian ancestors
justifiably feared the unknown. Therefore we must raise our children
in an environment of diversity and understanding. That is the hope of
mankind.
With this revelation warming my heart,
I settled in for the night's sleep. This confirmation of my natural
inclination was an unexpected result of this experiment. I drifted
off to sleep wondering what other discoveries I would make, to what
new visions into the human psyche the creature would introduce me.
I failed to sleep through the night,
however. Some sensation, like a premonition, or perhaps an intuition,
awoke me. There was something present, not quite stirring but
definitely present, outside our cabin. I rose from my bed and
cautiously peered out the window. The night was brightly lit by the
nearly-full moon, and in the clearing I saw about eight or nine creatures, each one a height that rivaled that of my creature, standing perfectly still.
Had I never seen the clearing before I
would have assumed they were some sort of stunted trees, or other
natural formation, standing, loosely grouped at the edge of the
ground, their stillness being so perfect. But there was a sensation
emanating from them. It was not quite a sound, but more of a wave, a
vibration, that affected me in a most curious manner. One might think
that this was merely the natural feelings of fear, uncertainty, and
trepidation, but no, I was quite familiar with those feelings
already. This was rather more a feeling of comfort, as if I was drawn
to them. I approached them and found myself before them faster than I
thought I could traverse the distance. I wondered if they were capable
of moving without my noticing, or if perhaps my perception of time
and distance were being somehow affected.
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